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![]() by Daniel Holloway
If Little Black is just one room in the house that is Reporter, close study
of that room gives no indication as to just how big the house might be. No story
arc is apparent in Little Black; rather, the strips are individual lines that
intersect at surprising angles. A character from one strip might be mentioned in
a conversation between two other characters several strips later, or sit down
next to yet another on a bus. As these characters all appear to have recurring
roles in the as of yet unclear larger story arc, the intersections of their lives
give the illusion of movement in that larger story. The movement is an illusion
because, although information is divulged, the reader has no idea to what end it
is divulged. In revealing these relationships, Williams hints at the plot yet to
come, but opts not to dirty his hands with it just yet.
Williams' best strips exploit this approach to its fullest. "Rain Comes Down"
and "Lazy Man" rely heavily on it, and by far are the best strips in the
collection. By no coincidence, these stories rely on the same structure: a frame
in which the character Ivar listens to another character tell a story. Williams
executes the frame perfectly, and has created in Ivar the perfect character
through which to do so. Ivar is a non-intrusive listener, but also manages to
show off a queer sense of humor and introspective nature that are just enough to
make the reader want to see more of him. Williams is fully aware of this, and
shortly after "Lazy Man" comes "Shoes," in which the reader receives a
tantalizing scrap of Ivar's life story.
The thing Little Black does best is keep the reader hungry for more. Williams
is a taskmaster of a storyteller, serving vital information in the smallest of
portions. He flirts with the reader, raising the skirt on Reporter inch by inch,
never giving in to the temptation to rip the whole dress off in one coarse
motion.
But how long he can keep this striptease going is a question that bears
asking. As mentioned before, not all of these strips are on the same level. In
the weaker strips, Williams appears either to be marking time in the march toward
the unveiling of his plot or forcing the introduction of characters that somehow
figure into that story but do not quite fit into the world which has developed
from it. Because each strip is part of the larger story, the weak ones cannot be
dismissed as mere exceptions to an otherwise strong collection. They are instead
the soft spots in the attic floor that must be danced around in order to keep
from falling through.
Then there is the question of the Reporter Notes, a prologue and series of
brief character biographies that only serves to muddy the waters. If the story
Williams describes in the prologue really is the one he intends Little Black to
be the first chapter of, it would not be an overestimation to say that it will
take him between 40 and 50 such collections to finish it. The story in Little
Black appears to be one of lives intersecting in Altmanesque fashion, while Notes
gives the impression of a grand epic with "a cast of thousands." How Williams
will reconcile his approach with his concept -- if he chooses to pursue that
concept to its end -- will be interesting to watch.
If there was humor in Lootine's portrayal, he might be able to squeak some
mileage out of it. But the rage he relies on for relevance is also what he relies
on for comedy, and it is a rage that is questionable in its sincerity. Lootine's
comics have all the thoughtfulness of a fraternity brother who just got busted
for possession, trying to do an impression of the cop that nabbed him for the
boys back at the house, overusing the words "fat" and "fuck." A vague
understanding of the reasons for throwing these cartoon bombs is displayed, but
it really just comes down to being on the opposite side of the line from their
targets.
In the opening to a lengthy introduction, Jack Turnbull informs the reader
that most of Apollo Astro #5 was created during his junior year of high school.
Though he does not appear to divulge this information for the purpose of setting
the rest of the book in a particular context, that is exactly what he does. One
either finds the creative endeavors of teenagers more annoying or more endearing
because of the trappings of their age. Turnbull's work is the latter.
Apollo Astro #5 is made up of several vignettes and one longer piece. The
vignettes are the strength of the collection. Turnbull nails teenage longing in
all of its stomach churning, self-important aching in "The Girl From Outer Space"
and "Meet Nichole" with impressive clarity. He then turns on childhood memories
with "Hug #1 (My Father)" and ties the collection up with the cartoony fun "Blood
Brothers: Part One," featuring a rectangle with eyes and a circle with hair.
Between "Meet Nichole" and "Hug #1 (My Father)" falls the less successful but
still interesting "The Night I Met You Everything Changed." The strip warrants
extra attention, not because it falls short of the artistic level reached in the
other strips, but for two other reasons: First, at 40 pages, "Night" is obviously
the centerpiece of this collection. Second, "Night" represents something of an
artistic step past the nostalgic strips, as it relies on that nostalgia to
misdirect the reader.
"Night" is a zombie story disguised in the skin of a story about the
pressures of fitting in during high school. Turnbell's decision to replace
typical party behavior of drinking and drug use with a scene of cute teenagers
eagerly devouring a 13-year-old boy is questionable in its execution. The final
scene, in which the protagonist saves two middle-school kids from being eaten,
gives them his skateboard and yells after them, "Don't stop skating!" as zombies
close in is over-the-top at best. Still, the use of the drug and alcohol proxy
yields some genuinely arresting moments, such as early in the story when what
looks like a bag of weed is revealed to be a bag of human fingernails. The last
of these moments comes at the party, when the 13-year-old boy is brought out from
the basement. In the moment before the reader realizes what the teens are about
to do to their younger peer, the intrigue is at a peak. When the kids start
devouring the boy, Turnbull takes it one step too far, and the strip slips into
cheesiness.
What is most interesting is that Turnbull does not make this misstep until
late in the story. For the first 22 pages, "Night" has all the appearances of a
fairly ordinary tale of teen longing, save a few moments of foreshadowing that
are far more shrewd than the events which they foretell. Turnbull slips the
fingernails in so gracefully in the first half that the reader does not realize
until the last moment that they will prove to be the crux of the story. While
Turnbull takes his plot twist too far, he does a deft job of hiding it in plain
sight. "Night" is more noteworthy not for what it fails to accomplish, but for
where it succeeds.
The five stories in the second issue of Artfly are taken from five prisoners'
dreams collected by Peter Conrad and Jesse Reklaw. One artist takes
responsibility for the transcription and penciling of each story, then passes the
strip to another member of the Artfly collective to be inked. Of the resulting
strips, the strongest are, not surprisingly, the ones taken from the most
coherent dreams.
"Hungry Mike," by Conrad and Brandt, tells the story of a prisoner who never
starts trouble but, either in spite of or because of his intimidating size,
always manages to find it. The strip works as a vignette, and manages in a short
amount of space to paint a portrait of a sad, quiet character who may be smarter
than he looks, the most well defined character in the collection.
Reklaw and Williams' "Recidivist" is, at two pages, the shortest strip, but
also the most introspective. The dream related portrays the criminal as someone
who feels cornered and desperate, and is frightened at the way in way in which he
reacts to those feelings. The portrayal of violence in "Recidivist" is the most
harrowing of any of the strips, as rather than being dreamlike, it is portrayed
in realistic terms. While violence is part of almost all of these stories, it is
portrayed elsewhere as either a fact of prison life or in romanticized dreamlike
visions.
The other dreams in Tales are of the more meandering, incoherent variety, but
only one suffers because of this. "What I Want" puts the humorously unreal on
display, as the main character and Burt Reynolds scour an office for a bong and
some nude pictures. Like "Recidivist," Brandt and Reklaw's "Eternal Night"
reveals a character wrestling with his own violent nature as he walks through
lushly illustrated dreamscapes that may be the most compelling artwork of the
book.
"Eternal Night" flirts with the vague, epic sensation of dreaming without
falling into the quagmire of incoherence that Conrad and Brandt are unable to
avoid in "The Poison of Suspicion." Conrad and Brandt are the only pair to work
together on two strips in Big House, and it is understandable that the approach
chosen in "Suspicion" would be so radically different from that in "Hungry Mike."
The clean A-to-B narrative that is the strength of "Hungry Mike" fits well with
the Conrad and Brandt's uncomplicated figure drawings. But the wandering
"Suspicion" needs more needs more dressing up, the way Brandt and Reklaw pull the
reader in by the eyeballs with "Eternal Night."
Though they read like strong exercises, the strips in Artfly still read like
exercises; the nature of the stories -- the fact that they are not stories at all,
but rather the real dreams of real people -- makes a certain amount of laziness
seem permissible. There is nothing particularly wrong with "Recidivist," for
example, but one wishes that its concepts were explored to greater depths. It is
understood that each of the Artfly artists has his own individual comics
pursuits, but why congregate if not to attempt to create something greater than
the sum of its parts?
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